JAYRMe The Killa
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Age : 31
Location : Chicago, IL
Humor : p00ping 0n BK's
Registration date : 2008-04-11
 |  Subject: New Song Im workin on. Thu May 15, 2008 6:12 pm | |
| One verse done so far let me get some feedback.
If it sounds bad ill just scrap it.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=TDITD4WB
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You can download there and listen to it.
Please send feedback I need it. | |
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FreshKickz Dsg
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Number of posts : 552
Age : 39
Location : Boston & Miami
Registration date : 2008-04-23
| | Subject: Re: New Song Im workin on. Thu May 15, 2008 6:30 pm | |
| sounds nice,but u gotta bring the vocals down | |
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JAYRMe The Killa
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Number of posts : 377
Age : 31
Location : Chicago, IL
Humor : p00ping 0n BK's
Registration date : 2008-04-11
| | Subject: Re: New Song Im workin on. Thu May 15, 2008 6:36 pm | |
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Darth Noob DSG
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Registration date : 2008-04-10
| | Subject: Re: New Song Im workin on. Thu May 15, 2008 6:53 pm | |
| just my opinion but i think u would sound better if you layed out your lyrics slower. you sound rushed, un-natural? i would maybe try slowin it down. | |
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