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JAYRMe The Killa I Like To Post
Number of posts : 377 Age : 32 Location : Chicago, IL Humor : p00ping 0n BK's Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: The dream that never was Sat Apr 12, 2008 8:17 pm | |
| These Writing are flowing into my viens, the blood, sweat and tears is the ink. My mind is the creator, the bleeding pen, and the words I create are the lyrics I speak. But wait a minute and Let me explain. The Genius of me fuels the engine of the brain, like the brain pumps the ink to the heart. The heart feeds the hunger of the soul, and without that the dream could never start. Without a dream the fuel continues to burn, and the ink begins to run low. the bleeding pen begins to die, and the writings in my viens cease to flow.
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Ray Mayer DSG DSG Co-Creator
Number of posts : 803 Age : 42 Location : Albany, OR Humor : you... under my feet. rank : Co-Creator Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Tue Apr 22, 2008 11:19 am | |
| that's pretty tight... what inspired you to write this? | |
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JAYRMe The Killa I Like To Post
Number of posts : 377 Age : 32 Location : Chicago, IL Humor : p00ping 0n BK's Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:54 pm | |
| I was listening to a song and one of the lines said these writing are flowing into my viens and thats where all of this came from. | |
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weilda DSG I Like To Post
Number of posts : 459 Age : 30 Location : MA/or the weapons dealer 360 gamer card : rank : Not in DSG Registration date : 2008-04-13
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:40 pm | |
| thats a lil confusing and hert my head alot kinda sounded a lil emo with the blood then everything stops (dead) kinda kreepy but thats my opinion. .lol. | |
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JAYRMe The Killa I Like To Post
Number of posts : 377 Age : 32 Location : Chicago, IL Humor : p00ping 0n BK's Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:46 pm | |
| This poem is talking about a "writers inspiration" and if left unused or if there is nothing to accomplish with it then it will disappear forever. Gotta read inbetween the lines. | |
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weilda DSG I Like To Post
Number of posts : 459 Age : 30 Location : MA/or the weapons dealer 360 gamer card : rank : Not in DSG Registration date : 2008-04-13
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:02 am | |
| I understand know lol thank you J the english teacher I guess you excell in English class or what ever class that you take that includes music and poems lol | |
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JAYRMe The Killa I Like To Post
Number of posts : 377 Age : 32 Location : Chicago, IL Humor : p00ping 0n BK's Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:37 am | |
| Nope I take no classes dealing with music however I do have an A average in English class if that counts for anything. But ya boy J is just a metaphorcial genius what can I say? | |
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FreshKickz Dsg Post Junkie!
Number of posts : 552 Age : 39 Location : Boston & Miami Registration date : 2008-04-23
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:12 pm | |
| i see this category is all yours | |
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weilda DSG I Like To Post
Number of posts : 459 Age : 30 Location : MA/or the weapons dealer 360 gamer card : rank : Not in DSG Registration date : 2008-04-13
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:05 pm | |
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FreshKickz Dsg Post Junkie!
Number of posts : 552 Age : 39 Location : Boston & Miami Registration date : 2008-04-23
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Sat Apr 26, 2008 7:51 pm | |
| are these poems or lyrics? | |
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JAYRMe The Killa I Like To Post
Number of posts : 377 Age : 32 Location : Chicago, IL Humor : p00ping 0n BK's Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:22 pm | |
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FreshKickz Dsg Post Junkie!
Number of posts : 552 Age : 39 Location : Boston & Miami Registration date : 2008-04-23
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Sun Apr 27, 2008 1:33 pm | |
| do you record your lyrics? | |
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JAYRMe The Killa I Like To Post
Number of posts : 377 Age : 32 Location : Chicago, IL Humor : p00ping 0n BK's Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Sun Apr 27, 2008 2:46 pm | |
| Yes Yes but my mic sucks so none have been recorded lately. | |
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FreshKickz Dsg Post Junkie!
Number of posts : 552 Age : 39 Location : Boston & Miami Registration date : 2008-04-23
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:39 pm | |
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JAYRMe The Killa I Like To Post
Number of posts : 377 Age : 32 Location : Chicago, IL Humor : p00ping 0n BK's Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Wed Apr 30, 2008 4:34 pm | |
| mostly freestyles over wack beats i hate recording because my mic is garbage. | |
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FreshKickz Dsg Post Junkie!
Number of posts : 552 Age : 39 Location : Boston & Miami Registration date : 2008-04-23
| Subject: Re: The dream that never was Fri May 02, 2008 12:23 am | |
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