Just A Concept

This following rhyme may be deemed "controversial" so if you are not going to reply with something positive about the poem and post your personal opinion then don't because honestly I don't care and you will not change my mind.


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This is just a concept, for you to rhyme with,
Pick up a book to pick up your mind set.
Learn a new word to expand your horizon,
Don't be offended by my words so stop cryin'.

[Pause]

(They say) Jesus was crucified not for you but my sins,
But I can see right through it, I can tell the bibles liein'.
For one reason (why?) let me tell you why,
The real reason Jesus Christ had to die.
He died because of the Roman's greed,
they thought it would kill the people's self esteem.
(and then) then they would come crawling back,
Like a baby to mother just like that.
But naw they were wrong his followers keep there sanity,
and created this religion called Christianity.
(where) where they worshiped Marie's son like a god,
to me that illogical and just seems so wrong.
(because) Jesus was just like us born in a womb,
fathered by a brother just like me and you.
So why is he worshiped like a false king?
A crown of thorns and he bleeds like a human being.
So I wonder why is he on some holy level?
So much blasphemy might as well worship the devil. (why you liein')
Naw man I aint try to start an uproar,
I'm just pointin the flaws for what some people live for.


- JAYRMe

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Like I said don't be offended I don't care if you don't believe in my beliefs because they are my opinion and what I think.


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So before you come attacking me and try to convert me,
remember words are words and they can never hurt me.
- JAYRMe

that was nice.

lol... this is overwhelmed with disclaimers.... maybe a direct link would have been better, but since there are disclaimers... Your writings are good. Just leaves me wondering... what will you think up next?

Well im working on a new one on how a persons greed drives him to kill his best friends and himself.