My Poem Titled *Slowly*

And slowly she lays and cries


Hope you like it

that was a really good poem. good rhyming and all.

gah thats really nice

u need 2 get that put it a book. lol, but really is a good poem , a gr8 organization. and rythmeing and everything. if u dont at least try 2 get it n a book ima slap u. k lol

ima slap you?

yep if she dont get it n a book. i will

lol you a pimp?

nope i dont think so anyway. lol

cmon how many you got working on the corner eh?

lemme make some phone calls and ill find out. lol

Omg yall, lol no im his pimp hes my lil beeeotch lol ask him! lol, but thank you guys, I got lots more so if u wanna hear them just let me know

yes mam,,,,, im da ***** .. and hell yes we wanna hear some more..

EDIT: ^^HAHA TOOOOOOOL^^

lol, I guess but yea I will totally put some more on here when I get the chance, I love people to read my poems and comment on them, because I want to know how people feel about my writing, criticism is welcome to because I want your opinions, no matter how you feel. I will not get angry. Thanks for taking the time to read this, I really appreciate it

i liked that poem, try writing something happy sometime to :]

ye a lil less depressing lol.

i thought it was really cool and very depresing but still good. so is beast next on the list or is it still me.

lol prob still you xD

NOOOOOO why did chillybob have to leave he and thelxinoe were perfect. But now she moved on to Hainzy lolz.

lmfao, chillybob was unapreciative with his spot and threatened that if he didnt get his spot hes leaving, so i said.................Goodbye lmao

lolz i know and he told me to quit he he but i didnt yay me. but really go find a different target i is off the list.

lol when were you on it? lol jk your next haha

Stahky u got competition but ur next cuz ur begging not to be, that makes u more vulnerable duh! lol, if Blake dont watch it he'll be on it lol

Ha Ha blake you on da list of child melesting someone find chillybob before we all on the list.

oh snap................................................................................................................................................................
well, uh thelxinoe i love you dont put me on the list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol

now dont say you love her you are just attracting attention and she will like you more and that no good. But maybe hainzy can distract her long enough so she will forget about the lists or just about me being on the list.